All posts by Antal Zollner
@Spider-Dinobot You're welcome.Actually, these ideas are good to me but unfortunately I don't see it ever happening (given the Covenant reception) but let's hope.
@DarkSideOfTheMoon22 You're welcome, I am glad to read your writing! Oh I hadn't heard about that I'll check the settings then.
Well, it was very interesting to read, it's been a long time since I've had the opportunity to read on such a wide range of topics. I'll start with the positives first.
1: I really liked the beginning of the chapter with the mistical and horror narration and the fact that they call the Aliens demons. I particularly liked the parable of Pandora's box.
2: The characters and their dialogues (especially Graymalkin and Tim) are very well done, and their behaviour is very appropriate in this situation.
3: I liked the descriptions,the locations and the wording as well as the plot and it gave the chapter a creepy atomosphere.The ending is particularly scary even if it contains traces of Prometheus and Coveanat ispiration which is fine.
Negatives:
1: First of all, a word of advice: I think you should write in Google docs (which is what I use) because this publish it's too long and very confluent.Although it's Fandom Wiki's fault that it's black background and white letters but unfortunately it's very bad for the eyes if you read for a long time.(At least for me).
2: I think the chapter is too long.I've been told by many people I write 15-20 pages that it's a bit long and I understand why you wrote so much, because you wanted to unfold the plot.It's just that most people don't read very long writing (in my experience).
3: This also relates to my second point.The length of the chapter meant that I sometimes lost the thread of the plot, and I also saw some time drags in one or two places, which slowed the plot down a bit.I'm not saying that it should be an orgy of action, but sometimes you need a little update.
All in all, it was a very good chapter and it was fun to read.I'm sorry if my words they seemed a bit offensive, but I didn't mean to offend you.Good luck with the second chapter!
Although I have my doubts about how Romulus could be continued, this is a very good and promising concept combining the ideas of Covenant and Romulus.The question is how much fans would like that. Also, there would be timeline problems because Covenant takes place before the first film and Romolus takes place between the first two films, so what would David have done in that time?That said, it seems a promising idea to me, and it has captured my imagination.
Very interesting. Does this mean that you will publish the first chapter on Wednesday?
@DarkSideOfTheMoon22 Yes, I saw it and wrote you a message.
@DarkSideOfTheMoon22 antal321
@DarkSideOfTheMoon22 Unfortunately I couldn't find you on Discord, I couldn't write a message:(
@Gwbarni All right
@Gwbarni I will contact also you as soon as we have more ideas and concepts.(Egyébként örülök,hogy te is magyar vagy:)
Okay thanks.
Well, for the time being, it looks like we're going to do a full remake and reboot the story.If we have talked through the details I will contact you.Do you have a Disocrd account?
Sorry for the late reply! I am very glad that some people are doing this! The concept looks promising! Actually me and a few of other fan are working on an Alien vs Predator FanFiciton with the first chapter publised in 2024 February.We'd like to include you in the project if you'd like.
We really need a new AVP movie but not with these creators.Prey is a weak movie( I don't think the Predator was portrayed well, both in behavior and appearance)and Romolus is a took over of the other Alien movies.It's not bad but there are some hiatuses so I don't know how it could be continued or what idea Alvarez could come up with.
You're welcome
The movie in debuted in the United States in 1986. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aliens_(film)
Alines. But the film is from 1986.My second favourite is probably AVP(2004).
I really like that you have put the ending of Predator 2 in a novel.Well, Dutch coming back in Predator 2 would have been a very good concept.Although I do question why he work do that for the OWFL.I like much better what is in the legends, that Dutch, after Predator 1 after events, soon after his recovery from the hospital, disappeared and hid alone and waited for another Predator to return...(Taking a kind of revenge). But yes, once canon can also be what you wrote.
Very interesting and creative idea! You could even make it into a specific story that would be broken down into chapters.
My opinion is that when I first saw it, I didn't like it because the marketing of the film was that there would be aliens in it.They were not.Then I watched it more and more and I like it more and more.I like the mystery and the way the story unfolds and the engineers.Of course it has its faults, but overall it's a good film (unlike Alien Covenant).